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EF: A87835477 - The Great Telescope of Birr Castle, Ireland

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

A87835477

I've just returned from another trip to Birr Castle, so I would like to make a few small changes to this entry.

1. Change "a giant stone" to "a boulder".

2. Change:
"The gardens also feature a science centre"
To:
"The gardens also feature a science exhibition"

3. Please remove the sentence "Unfortunately, at the time of writing (June 2014), this is closed for restoration."

smiley - oksmiley - booksmiley - galaxy


EF: A87835477 - The Great Telescope of Birr Castle, Ireland

Post 2

Bluebottle

Hey Gnomon, don't mind the wait
Take an out-of-date entry and make it better
Remember to let h2g2 into your heart
Then you can start to make it better

And anytime captcha causes pain
Hey Gnomon, refrain
I've now changed 'giant stone' into 'a boulder'
I deleted 'exhibition' and instead did enter
The words 'science centre'
The suggestions you made are on your shoulder
Nah nah nah nah-nah nah-nah-nah nah

Hey Gnomon, this looked exciting
At time of writing I'm glad it is better
Remember now that the restoration's ended
It is all amended, we made it
Better better better better better better, oh

smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
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smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon
smiley - musicalnoteNah nah nah nah-nah-nah nah, nah-nah-nah nah, hey Gnomon

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*Warning - this is what prolonged exposure to Captcha does to people...


EF: A87835477 - The Great Telescope of Birr Castle, Ireland

Post 3

Icy North

Now I understand why they split.


EF: A87835477 - The Great Telescope of Birr Castle, Ireland

Post 4

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks Bluebottle.


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