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EF - A241930 Tim Hortons

Post 1

anhaga

A241930

Could the present final sentence be modified (as the Canadian Forces and Tim Hortons are no longer in Kandahar) to read:

" On 29 June, 2006, the Tim Hortons in Afghanistan was officially opened and served 2.5 million customers of 37 nationalities before closing in November 2011 as Canadian Forces were being redeployed from Kandahar."

and, could a new short paragraph be added at the end:

"In the aftermath of the catastrophic floods in Alberta in June, 2013, Tim Hortons created a special 'Wild Rose' donut modelled on Alberta's Provincial Flower. All proceeds from the limited time sale of the Wild Rose were to be donated to the flood relief efforts of the Canadian Red Cross."

Thanks.smiley - smiley


EF - A241930 Tim Hortons

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

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EF - A241930 Tim Hortons

Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

Done.smiley - biro

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EF - A241930 Tim Hortons

Post 4

anhaga

Thanks!smiley - smiley


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