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Rudest Elf Started conversation Apr 19, 2011
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? It was developed for use in automatic production lines, and taken up wholheartedly by the *automotive* industry. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henry_F._Phillips
single slot ?
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Apr 19, 2011
I've done all those except for "simple slot", which is correct, and "automatic industry", which doesn't sound right but I can't think of a suitable alternative at the moment.
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anhaga Posted Apr 19, 2011
I think that '"Robertson", with a square head' should be changed to read:
'"Robertson", with a square head, a Canadian invention and the best, most slip-resistant screw design ever,'
Perhaps I'm biased.
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Rudest Elf Posted Apr 19, 2011
Thank you, Gnomon.
The word 'simple' is used several times in the entry, 'simple slot' just twice. Perhaps I should have given more of the context for your consideration: "Instead of a simple slot, there were two". Does changing it to 'single slot' make more sense to you now?
Off to bed. Good night.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Apr 20, 2011
Thanks, Elf. I've made the "simple slot" change. I'm still unsure about the "automated industry".
Anhaga, I've reworded that sentence to include your tribute to Canadian invention.
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Geggs Posted Apr 20, 2011
Shouldn't "Since Phillip's innovatory approach " be "Since Phillips' innovatory approach ", since the fellow's surname was Phillips and not Phillip? It's something I often get confused over, though. I may be wrong.
Geggs
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Apr 20, 2011
It should be either Phillips' or Phillips's, depending on whether the author actually says one or two s sounds. I've changed it to the first one.
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