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Alternative Writing Workshop: A981281 - The Game of Life

Post 1

Prof.Burnham

Entry: The Game of Life - A981281
Author: Matt - U220487

Professor Burnham's student. Please post comments/critiques etc.


A981281 - The Game of Life

Post 2

a girl called Ben

Well, Matt stayed around a little longer than most of Prof Burnham's students, and even wrote another entry here...

Hmmm.

Anyways, my vote is that this thread goes back to the entry.

Matt, if you are reading this, and want to work on this piece some more, just bung it back here in the Alternative Writing Workshop, and hopefully someone will comment on it.

B


A981281 - The Game of Life

Post 3

nadia

Another one who doesn't seem inclined to come back.

I found the style repetative. It's a nice idea but it's dragged out too far.

Seconded.
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