h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I have rewritten some of this on advice , deleted portions , corrected the errors I was able to find , and practised my formatting .

Once again thrown open to peer review

I may be dumb-- but I still think I covered all the suggestions in the correspondence about the article-- either directly or by implication

To say more about its suitability for the guide may well leave me open to a charge of petulance -- but without giving the impression of wishing to "take me bat and go 'ome " -- could someone please advise me how to get rid of the damned thing from here if it is not going to be picked up ? It is beginning to annoy me

I would also like to know why it is unsuitable .

This has been accepted for subediting -- but it seems to have stalled at that point -- I was told that I would be contacted about it -- but I have herd nothing since August