h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: The Kin-der-Kids - A Comic Strip by Lyonel Feininger - A926651
Author: Stephen P. - U34696

Lyonel Feininger had a long and successful career as an artist, but his comic strips are perhaps the least-known of his output. Here's an entry on one of those strips.

Stephen

Great entry! I've just one point, maybe it would be a bit easier to understand if you put the fact that the kids were travelling around the world in a bathtub, or even just a brief synopsis of the general story before launching into it. Just an idea anyway! it might make people more likely to read it anyway!

Makes sense - I'll move the synopsis so that it comes before the cast of characters, and think about expanding the description a bit. Thanks.

Stephen

That's great well done!

As someone who doesn't know about the topic in the slighlest I can't think if there's anything else that you need to add!

Thanks! The one thing I hoped to find but didn't was a webpage with some images from the strip. I found a few with tiny images, which don't do justice to the drawing. Still, I'll keep looking, and if anything turns up I'll add a link.

Stephen

We probably wouldn't be able to link to anything other than an official webpage in this instance, due to copyright concerns, but that shouldn't be too much of a worry because the text here looks fab!

So good, in fact, that a Scout has recommended it for the Edited Guide. So, is this ready to progress, or do you need a little more time to finish it off. Let me know either way

Jimster

I think it's ready for the tender attentions of the subeditors (No sarcasm intended). Go to it!

Stephen

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Thanks!

Stephen