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Peer Review: A888447 - Duck Soup - The Classic Movie

Post 1

The Ghost of Polidari

Entry: Duck Soup - The Classic Movie - A888447
Author: Polidari Wormwood - U180959

Hello - I think this is just about in condition to come into Peer Review. Let me know what you think.

And just remember if you've got time enough to read this, you've got time to see the movie...


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McKay The Disorganised

Good one Polidari smiley - ok Though my favourite Marx Bros is 'A day at the races' I'm a fan of all their stuff.

Quick typo for you para 1 'their are no musical solos' change to there.

Great. smiley - cheers


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Post 3

The Ghost of Polidari

Thank you very much smiley - ok.

Typo corrected.


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Post 4

The Ghost of Polidari

Hello?

Anyone?

Anybody out there??????




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Post 5

King Cthulhu of Balwyniti

Looks great to me Polidari! Unfortunately I haven't seen this one yet, have to find it somewhere... for one reason or another it's never one of the Marx Brothers films that gets played on TV over here (Australia) smiley - sadface So I can't really comment on the content too much, but the style and whatnot all looks smiley - ok


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Nice one Polidari smiley - ok

Here's a few link suggestions;

If you use instead of [HREF], h2g2 entries will be listed as such in a seperate section in the data box.

You could also link to the IMDB pages for Chico, Harpo, and Zeppo, at least until someone writes entries for them, as well as the IMDB page for the film itself.

And if you write a link with an added tag (like this: IMDB</LINK&gtsmiley - winkeye, you can control how the link appears in the data box smiley - smiley


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Post 7

The Ghost of Polidari

Thanks chaps smiley - ok.

All updated as suggested Gosho - though for some reason the H2G2 links haven't appeared in a separate section (unless I've missed it!).

Also added links to IMDB for Margaret Dumont, Edgar Kennedy and Louis Calhern.


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Post 8

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

I'm no guru, but I can see something which may be cause of the problem with your h2g2 links Poli:

Marx Brothers

Try taking out the forward slash after the entry number and see what happens smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Spiff


Crikey, another absolute cracker! smiley - ok This is great. I really had a good smiley - laugh out loud at that final bit of Groucho dialogue - timeless. smiley - ta

I like the format too, the intro and presentation of the whole; classic scenes, and then something on each of the cast. And as i said, great way to end it! top hole, smiley - biggrin

Well, the scouts have got plenty coming up to choose from, I've read three absolute corkers today alone. Good to see.

am i going soft in the head, or is PR just on particularly fine form? smiley - biggrin

cya
spiff


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Post 10

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

A little from column A and a little from column B, Spiff smiley - nahnah

smiley - winkeye


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Post 11

The Ghost of Polidari

H2G2 links all fixed.

Thanks again all smiley - cheers


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Post 12

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

smiley - cool


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Post 13

The Ghost of Polidari

Remembers to wait patiently....


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Post 14

Spiff


did you mean 'Forgets to wait patiently'? smiley - winkeye


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Post 15

The Ghost of Polidari

That would be it smiley - ok.


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Post 16

The Ghost of Polidari

Patiently waits for a smiley...


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Post 17

Researcher PSG

Put your tumbleweed away Poldari. I thought this looked good so I've recommended it.

Researcher PSG


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Post 18

The Ghost of Polidari

Good man smiley - cheers


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Post 19

The Ghost of Polidari

If you enjoyed this why not check out

Flywheel, Shyster and Flywheel A897320 : now in a PR near you...

And don't forget the great Marx Brothers article that's in there now as well...


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Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Polidari! I haven't been hanging around Peer Review lately, (too busy singing) so I've only just seen this. It is excellent! smiley - ok
My only suggestion is that in the conversation between Groucho and Margaret Dumont, you alternate lines between plain text and italic text.


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