A Conversation for Writing Right with Dmitri: Taking Pity on the Reader
A good lesson.
Vip Started conversation Dec 9, 2017
This is something I struggle with all the time; how to manage to put over something that I am excited about without turning it into about my excitement itself.
A good lesson.
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Dec 9, 2017
Make the readers feel like your excitement is *their* excitement...maybe build up a bit of suspense? 
A good lesson.
Vip Posted Dec 9, 2017
*nods* Engage the reader! Bring them along the journey with me! Make them be as excited about canals as I am!
This may or may not be out of my league.
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A good lesson.
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