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Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: Carry On Laughing - A87900249
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

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A87900249 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: Carry On Laughing

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

I enjoyed reading this - good breezy tone to it smiley - ok

The only paragraph that was hard work was about the recurring settings - I think you just need to specify that characters in bold in the table appeared in more than one episode and then you could trim the paragraph to something like:

"Of the 13 episodes, six were standalone adventures. Seven featured a recurring cast and setting - three of these were murder mysteries featuring amateur detective Lord Peter Flimsy, two were set in the time of Queen Guinevere and King Arthur, and two had an 'Upstairs Downstairs' focus in the Bludgeon-Plunger household."

smiley - ok


A87900249 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: Carry On Laughing

Post 3

Bluebottle

Thanks, I've tweaked that paragraph nowsmiley - ok

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A87900249 - The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: Carry On Laughing

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SashaQ - happysad and 'slightly mad'

I noticed some of the broadcast dates need checking, and if you could put them in House Style at the same time that would be excellent smiley - ok


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Post 5

Bluebottle

smiley - ta Updated.

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