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Entry: The Ultimate Carry On Film Guide: 1965 - 1969 - A87899783
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

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Now halved to be about 5 films.

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Excellent - this flows well

I wondered about the can can girls - an interesting turn of phrase that I can't work out what it means...

I Carry on Doctor table is it again that the cast list is divided into patients and visitors, likein Carry on Nurse?

Thanks for the read through and comments - I reworded the Can-Can section, just because I can-can, and 'Carry On ' credits is now rearranged to be similar to the section in 'Carry On '.

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Does the paragraph beginning "1965 and Carry on Cowboy marked several actors' first Carry On appearances" fit better in the Carry On Cowboy section?

Apart from that, this is looking good

Fair enough, I've nudged those sentences down a bit.

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