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D is for damselflies

Post 1

minorvogonpoet

Not far from where I live, there is a place where a stream flows under a little bridge. Sometimes in the summer, I've seen blue-winged damselfies there - I think they're banded demoiselles. I looked them up, found that they belong to the order odonata, which were perhaps the earliest creatures to fly, and came up with this poem.

DAMSELFLIES

A sudden dash though sunshine
a flash of iridescent blue,
damselflies chase and trail
loops of light across the stream.

Their eyes, black and round as berries,
watch aimless rise and fall of gnats
with multi-faceted precision.
At rest, their tracery of wings
intricate as stained-glass windows;

but even in lapis lazuli, plated
joints reveal a prehistoric past.
Do they hear echoes of an age
when they ruled among tall ferns?.


D is for damselflies

Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

I like how you capture the 'flash and dash' of the damselflies' movements smiley - biggrin

I enjoyed a few minutes this summer in a nature reserve, when there were loads of tiny iridescent blue damselflies hovering around my feet. My tall companions couldn't see them because they were too far away, but for a few moments I felt like I was surrounded by glints of magic smiley - magic


D is for damselflies

Post 3

minorvogonpoet

Thanks smiley - smiley


D is for damselflies

Post 4

FWR

Love that last bit.smiley - applause


D is for damselflies

Post 5

minorvogonpoet

Thanks smiley - smiley


D is for damselflies

Post 6

cactuscafe

Such a beautiful poem! I love the last two lines, the echoes of an age..

I don't think I've ever seen a damselfly. Or maybe I have, without realising..


D is for damselflies

Post 7

minorvogonpoet

You might have confused them with dragonflies.smiley - erm


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