A Conversation for Writing Right with Dmitri - How Not to Be a Travel Bore

But never forget to tell us about the food!

Post 1

KB

The food is important.

I'm going to say something here which verges on heresy:

Tell, don't show.

Use your words to tell me the picture. It's your words I'm interested in. Your slang. The stuff I *can't* read on every tripadvisor clone site out there. smiley - winkeye

If you tell it well, I promise to see it well. smiley - winkeye


But never forget to tell us about the food!

Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Good point, there. smiley - smiley Be generous with the sharing.


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