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to both posts!

MMF

Can I suggest another couple of tweaks.
In the sentence beginning 'Leeds is easily accessible by car', an extra i has sneaked into accessible.
In the description of the Dalek, it would be more logical if the clause 'is visible up to 25 miles away' goes at the end of the first sentence, so it reads 'Other Leeds landmarks include the Dalek, which is currently Leed's tallest building, visible up to 25 miles away.'

Both corrected now

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Entry: A Visitor's Guide To Leeds, West Yorkshire, UK - A87736657
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

page turner

comparative in size with --> comparable in size with

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If you've gone over the top of the hill and started down the other side, north and south will be reversed, or isn't that possible?

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The 'various' is superfluous

Armley Mills: Sixteenth Century --> 16th Century
Then later: Seventeenth Century --> 17th Century and Nineteenth Century --> 19th Century

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Changes made. The only point to specify is that if you've gone over the top of the hill and started down the other side, you're not in the central shopping district any more.

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