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Entry: Salt dough christmas decorations - A87725497
Author: minichessemouse Ace, Mod, Guru. - U8131912


This looks ready to me?

>>> Combine the ingredients together in a bowl the consistency should be such that the dough can be rolled and shaped easily.

Probably want to make this two sentences: Combine the ingredients together in a bowl. The consistency should be such that the dough can be rolled and shaped easily

>>> to produce a more consistent colour the food colouring should be added to the water before mixing with the flour and salt.

Capitalize the initial letter.

>>> This is best done with a Pencil or a Chopstick

Lower case pencil and chopstick, and a dot at the end of the sentence.

This is best done with a pencil or a chopstick.

Poster paint or even Water colours can be used.You may also choose to use Glitter to give them some Sparkle. Once the paint is dry varnish them with either PVA glue or clear varnish.

Lower case water, glitter, and sparkle. A space between used. and You.

>>> Take care to store your decorations in a dry location, the PVA glue, or Varnish should help to protect you decorations.

Lower case varnish and add an r to you, that is, protect your decorations.

It seems that it might be quicker for a sub-editor to fix these problems? They are very minor.

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Well done!

Ooh err Thanks, this had slipped my mind. I Liked Sol's picture of these that was used on the Create Christmas tree. Only about 4 of my decorations actually got finished, and I didn't get the chance to take pictures of the ones the cub-scouts made.

mini

Congratulations Mini