A Conversation for Clovelly, Devon.

Peer Review: A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 1

Pheroneous

Entry: Clovelly, Devon. - A799897
Author: Pheroneous - U145986

In a week in which my last languishes listless and forlorn in the most neglected list, I should like, if I may, undismayed, to offer another small geographical entry for your consideration, in the hope of guiding the passing hitch-hiker to a not entirely insignificant corner of this paltry globe.


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 2

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

smiley - bigeyes What a pleasant picture you paint Pheroneous smiley - smiley

I think the word 'incomers' may need hyphenating... I'm not 100% sure on that though.

I've often found that subheaders rather than headers are better for shorter paragraphs. Too many headers in an entry can break it up and make it look too... clunky. Sorry, I can't think of a better word.

I reckon this entry should get a pretty good reception smiley - ok


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 3

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Greetings!

I like this - I went to Clovelly a few times as a kid on various family holidays. The only thing that I can think to add is that (I think) there are bits of Clovelly that are outside the cobbled sloping bit, and are quite normal. I think that's "lower Clovelly" or something, but it's all a bit of a blur.

TTFN

Otto


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 4

Gnomon - time to move on

A good entry!

Your use of capital letters in headings is inconsistent. Other than that, it is great! Good to hear from you again, Pheroneous.smiley - smiley


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 5

Pheroneous

Praise from a professional, G, is praise indeed! Do you guys want to leave nothing for the subs to do?? I have attended to your needs, except that incomers should be a well enough used word by now to lose its hyphen.


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 6

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

There's a 'Vistors Centre' left to fix and perhaps you could give more precise directions on how to find the place, but that's about it.


smiley - cheers


A799897 - Clovelly, Devon.

Post 7

Pheroneous

Given that one of the themes entwined through this little effort is a distress at the sheer number of visitors, I am disinclined to add to them by enabling those who cannot, or will not, read a map to visit.


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Post 9

Gnomon - time to move on

Well done, Pheroneous! smiley - bubbly


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Post 10

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")

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