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Entry: Winchester Castle, Hampshire, UK - A79867147
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

An article about Winchester Castle.

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Can you remove the from the start of the first sentence.

Can you make sure that all references to South, North, East and West to have a lowercase first letter, except of course things like [These are mainly in the earlier parts of the Entry]

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King William, however, lived in the Royal Palace in the centre of Winchester, which he had doubled in size, rather *than* in the castle

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During the Anarchy, Henry de Blois at first wholeheartedly supported his brother Stephen's claim for the throne

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As papal legate he was even prepared to consecrate Matilda as queen

I may find more the next time I read it

Thanks for your suggestions - changes made!

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I The Rout Of Winchester, you sometimes say Empress Matilda and sometimes Queen. Picking one would be less confusing.

The rest all appears to be up to your usual high standards, BB.

That's because Queen Matilda fought Empress Matilda - which is confusing. I'll try to make that bit clearer.

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Aaaah, that makes more sense all of a sudden. I'll have another read through when you've made some changes.

I've made a few changes so that it is obvious whether I am writing about which Matilda and hopefully explained the two Matildas more.

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That is clearer, thankyou.

Anyone else?

I suspect people look at the title and assume this is the same article as the one on Wolvesey Castle, Winchester, Hampshire UK.

Either that or everyone's happy with it.

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>Emperor Claudius invaded Britain in 43AD< you could post a link to my article on the Roman invasion here.

Thats about it good work again

Good idea - link added.

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Thanks muchley

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Hello <BB< good work well done

A photo can be supplied if requested.

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