A Conversation for Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Peer Review: A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Noble Started conversation Jul 20, 2002
Entry: Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA - A790751
Author: Noble - U183110
A nice place for an afternoon in Denver.
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 21, 2002
Well, that was a fascinating read 
I particualarly liked the bit about clearing the old graveyard, and also being able to see the outlines of the old graves under the moonlight.
A few typos and grammatical errors...
"One of the large and older parks..."
Should probably read
"One of the largest and oldest..."
"It was called came to be called..."
"Boned and other artifacts..."
Bones.
There are a few others, but I've got to get ready for work right now 
A nice entry which should get into The Guide 
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Noble Posted Jul 21, 2002
I am very sorry. I copied the wrong file when I put submitted the piece. I copied an unproofed file; it had only been run through a spell check. I have replaced the peice with one that has had more proofing, so please take a second look...I think it is a little closer to the final version.
One thing that needs to stay is "larger and older" the park is 2nd and third in those two catagories.
Noble
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 23, 2002
Wonderful entry!
Perhaps a few links to other Denver entries, but otherwise really great stuff.
There *were* a few typos still, and I'd be willing to go back and list them if you want... But if you take them out, the Subs won't have a thing to do! 
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 31, 2002
*moving this back to the top of PR*
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Aug 10, 2002
* did something different *
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) Posted Aug 10, 2002
I see what you did
A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Aug 10, 2002
shhhhhhhhhhhhh !! 
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Aug 12, 2002
Oh, the Editors spoilt it
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Robert Posted Aug 19, 2002
"There *were* a few typos still, and I'd be willing to go back and list them if you want... But if you take them out, the Subs won't have a thing to do!"
And the problem with that is... .
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Peer Review: A790751 - Sunbathing on Boot Hill, Cheeseman Park, Denver, Colorado, USA
- 1: Noble (Jul 20, 2002)
- 2: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 21, 2002)
- 3: Noble (Jul 21, 2002)
- 4: Jimi X (Jul 23, 2002)
- 5: Jimi X (Jul 31, 2002)
- 6: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 10, 2002)
- 7: Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) (Aug 10, 2002)
- 8: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 10, 2002)
- 9: Jimi X (Aug 12, 2002)
- 10: h2g2 auto-messages (Aug 12, 2002)
- 11: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 12, 2002)
- 12: Robert (Aug 19, 2002)
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