A Conversation for Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Peer Review: A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Started conversation Jul 13, 2002
Entry: Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA - A773372
Author: Jimi X - U53353
Another entry about Delaware for your enjoyment.
This one about a restaurant in the Blue Hen State that serves more food than any three people have a right to consume.
- Jimi X
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") Posted Jul 15, 2002
Great, super, smashing!
This is fine - my only suggestion would be to join some of the sentences together into paragraphs, as the entry looks somewhat "bitty". It's a short entry (and would look shorter with more paragraphing), but there's nowt wrong with that.
Lots of good links to other entries as well - that's always a good thing!
TTFN
Otto
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 16, 2002
Thanks for giving it a read!
I was beginning to wonder if anybody was going to look at it...
This entry is part of my evil scheme to get some entries about Delaware into the Edited Guide since we don't have *any* at present. There's another one lurking somewhere in the depths of PR if you'd care to check it out too.
Thanks again!
- Jimi X
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) Posted Jul 16, 2002
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Z Posted Jul 16, 2002
I'm just ditttoing all that!,
I liked this entry a lot! despite the fact I don't eat fish and am about 2000 miles away from the place it managed to hold my interest.
If there's not anything in the edited guide on Delaware, there really should be, why not write a general entry on the place. The only thing i know about it is that the Delaware Water Gap was very fasionable in the 18th century. this is from "A Walk in the Woods" by Bill Bryson it seemed interesting to me then.
I'm looking for a pick atm, Amu why not pop a long to A697494 ok written by yours truely I'm going in for some shameless self publicity here and not really acting in a proffession scoutish manner...but two weeks without a response.
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 16, 2002
Actually the Delaware Water Gap is in Pennsylvania (it's a long story) and I've been warned about writing any more about the Keystone State....
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 16, 2002
Plus, since we're blatantly plugging here:
F48874?thread=193269
or even
F48874?thread=192275
*ahem*
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) Posted Jul 16, 2002
Sorry - I just found my 3rd pick. The title had caught my eye though. It was on my short list.
Next time maybe?
Good luck.
Awu.
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Z Posted Jul 16, 2002
Oh don't worry I'm almost a ventran at Peer Review, (though still new to scouting) and my first entry took six weeks to get picked though the next two were a lot faster. So I'm not bothered really, nice to know someone read it!
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A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 25, 2002
That's a good point. After the first dozen crabs it all kind of blurs together into a haze of gluttony...
A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 26, 2002
Since you're my editor, that little comment had better not appear in the final edit!
In my college days I once ate 31 full-sized, spicy chicken wings as part of an eating contest.
All the chicken you could eat, all the beer you could drink and a t-shirt for $10.
*That* was gluttony!
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Peer Review: A773372 - Old Mill Crab House, Bethany Beach, Delaware, USA
- 1: Jimi X (Jul 13, 2002)
- 2: Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") (Jul 15, 2002)
- 3: Jimi X (Jul 16, 2002)
- 4: Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) (Jul 16, 2002)
- 5: Z (Jul 16, 2002)
- 6: Jimi X (Jul 16, 2002)
- 7: Jimi X (Jul 16, 2002)
- 8: Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent) (Jul 16, 2002)
- 9: Z (Jul 16, 2002)
- 10: Sam (Jul 25, 2002)
- 11: h2g2 auto-messages (Jul 25, 2002)
- 12: Jimi X (Jul 25, 2002)
- 13: Sam (Jul 25, 2002)
- 14: Jimi X (Jul 26, 2002)
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