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Peer Review: A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Ek* this space intentionally left blank *ki

Entry: The Egg Banjo - A770168
Author: Ekki³ F'tang Hala³ Bah-Whing - [ACE-MUSE-CHIEFTAIN-KEEPER-PROCRASTINATOR-AMBASSADOR] - Part-time Penguin - U130666

Possibly the most important entry for the Guide thus far smiley - tongueout ... anyone got anything to add?


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

smiley - laugh

I have to admit to being an expert at the Egg Banjo smiley - biggrin This must get into the Guide if there's any justice, and isn't there an entry somewhere on how to fry the perfect egg that you could link to?


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Ek* this space intentionally left blank *ki

smiley - ok

I had a look for an entry on the perfect fried egg but couldn't find one ... I've put links to various other things though just in case!


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

You're right. I could have sworn there was one smiley - erm Maybe it was a conversation in a forum instead. Methinks there's an opening for a Guide entry there smiley - winkeye Or maybe I was thinking about the entry for boiled eggs. I know there was one for that.


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Zarquon's Singing Fish!

smiley - musicalnote Oh, me egg banjo, me egg banjo,
You'd better never bother with me egg banjo!
smiley - musicalnote

(sung to the tune of 'Me ol' Bamboo')

Liked the entry. Not much to add.

The perfect fried egg depends on whether you like the edges crispy or not. Matter of taste, really smiley - laugh.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

'matter of taste', LOOOL

Definitely Guide bound! smiley - ok


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Ashley


smiley - laugh

This really made me chuckle... (still is).

The only comment I have would be to remove the firt person references (not a big job).

I love the references to the 'pulling' shirt and now have images of sloshed researchers making egg banjos... smiley - smiley

Thank you for brightening my day. smiley - cheers


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Ek* this space intentionally left blank *ki

One tries ones hardest!! smiley - ok

1st person references consigned to the Sub-etha Trash Can - they deserved it!

smiley - cheers


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Geoff Taylor - Gullible Chump

I loved this entry. smiley - ok

I knew what egg banjo was, but I didn't know why. It's so obvious! Strumming away at a growing yolk stain; what else could it be?

I like the turns of phrase and the style. Really nice.

My only niggle is that one of the footnotes is a bit long for easy reading. Maybe you could consider redrafting that bit so it fits into the main text?

Minor niggle notwithstanding, this is a great entry and to the Guide with it.

smiley - cheers

Geoff


A770168 - The Egg Banjo

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Ek* this space intentionally left blank *ki

smiley - cheers Geoff

I'm assuming your referring to the Pulling Shirt footnote? I think it would detract too much from the Egg Banjo to have it in the main text but it is still important to state the lofty position such an article holds in a persons wardrobe!

So i've left it as it is smiley - tongueout ...


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