h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Cheesman's Gerbils - A755778
Author: Anna - U25

In case you were wondering about the recent run on italics submitting entries to Peer Review, every couple of weeks, we're coming up with ideas for entries and then we're picking them out of a hat. I got this one from Abi. I didn't know anything about gerbil keeping but now I do!

Let me know what you think

A fine entry.

Though I did laugh out loud at your sentence 'When taken home for the holidays they are lost down the back of the sofa, or are disastrously eaten by the family cat'

One thing I'd think about changing - 'small carers' to 'small caretakers'. While reading it, I stumbled over 'carers' briefly before divining your meaning.

But overall, this was a nice one.
And I wondered why you, and not Abi, wrote this...



- X

Jimi, thanks for that - it's a good suggestion

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