A Conversation for Expressing Breastmilk

A couple of proofreading points

Post 1

Gremlyn

Under the heading "How It's Done", 2nd paragraph, last sentence: I think it should read "large branches of pharmacies and even supermarkets."

1st footnote, 1st sentence: The "j" is missing from the word juggling.

Other than that, I think it's a good article. Having gone through motherhood breast feeding my son, I have to say I am very glad that curcumstances did not require me to express milk very often due to many of the attitudes and complications included.

Gremlyn


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A couple of proofreading points

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