A Conversation for St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

Peer Review: A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Entry: St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK - A734212
Author: KerrAvon- thingite in charge of revoltionary misspelt graffetttti - U189636

The third in the series- moving away from people and legends into actual stuff.


A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi again KerrAvon!

I'm not sure you need mention about it being the third in a series. What if not all your entries get recommended, or aren't recommended at the same time?

Small typo - alter = altar.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Good point- intro altered accordingly. I've corrected the typo too (teach me to type late at night)


A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Zarquon's Singing Fish!

smiley - ok

I forgot to ask earlier - who is Joseph Wright?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Joseph Wright was an artist, most famous for creating his orrey (sp?) you know, those models that show all the planets in the solar system

smiley - run Just off to add something to that effect to the entry smiley - smiley


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Done!


A734212 - St. Paul's Church, Little Eaton, Derbyshire, UK

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Well, I take it since the entry has shifted from peer review it was accepted for the edited guide- not that anyone bothered to tell me... smiley - smiley


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