A Conversation for Italia, etymology - ITALY (name)

Peer Review: A72812108 - Italia, etymology - ITALY (name)

Post 1

alberto Lupi

Entry: Italia, etymology - ITALY (name) - A72812108
Author: alberto Lupi - U14576424

I hope to be correct!


A72812108 - Italia, etymology - ITALY (name)

Post 2

BMT

Hi Alberto, welcome to PR.
On first read can't see a lot wrong with this.

In this section you state:-

"In the humble opinion of he writer the Oscan> Greek> Latin seems to be the most probable."

Is this your opinion or the opinion of another writer/scholar? If it's your personal opinion then unless you can substantiate it, then we wouldn't allow it in an Edited Article.
Articles written for the Edited Guide have to be factually correct and not include personal references and/or opinion.

There are some house style issues etc but we can deal with those later.

BMT Scout


A72812108 - Italia, etymology - ITALY (name)

Post 3

h5ringer

Unfortunately the author hasn't posted since this appeared in PR. I think it stands more chance for getting into the Guide than his other entry posted at the same time, but it would need a fair amount of rewording to be acceptable. Could this go to FM and be picked up by a passing kindly angel?

Thoughts Scouts.


A72812108 - Italia, etymology - ITALY (name)

Post 4

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


It needs a complete rewrite, but it could give someone a boost to write an Entry.

FM for me, too smiley - ok


lil xx


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Post 5

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

...and me

Lanzababy


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Post 6

h5ringer

Eds emailed


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