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neri_aracro Started conversation Mar 22, 2002
Entry: Why Hair Played An Important Role In Evolution - A716933
Author: Neri Aracro - U190807
A716933 - Why Hair Played An Important Role In Evolution
A716933 - Why Hair Played An Important Role In Evolution
il viaggiatore Posted Mar 23, 2002
This is a good start on an interesting subject. One thing that threw me off, though, was the pervasive use of conditionals (would and could). It makes your article seem like conjecture, which is not allowed in the edited guide. So I think you need to do some more research. If you have done so, and the things you say here are fact, state them as such.
A716933 - Why Hair Played An Important Role In Evolution
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Mar 24, 2002
ummh, and why is it that 'natural pullovers' are nowadays frowned upon?
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A716933 - Why Hair Played An Important Role In Evolution
neri_aracro Posted Apr 8, 2002
changes made
enjoy the improved article again
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il viaggiatore Posted Apr 9, 2002
Unless you're using greek punctuation in the last paragraph, that semicolon ( ; ) needs to be a question mark ( ? )
Congratulations!
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Apr 18, 2002
It's recommended 
There will be some delay before it hits the frontpage because it'll be handed over to a SubEd for a couple of weeks, but that's nothing to grow some gray hair over 
Keep an eye on the ComingUp page and you can track its movements.
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