A Conversation for The Major Villains In The Lord Of The Rings

Peer Review: A714737 - The Major Villans In The Lord Of The Rings

Post 1

Mystrunner

Entry: The Major Villans In The Lord Of The Rings - A714737
Author: Mystrunner (Ace) - Patron Saint of Assassins, The Sunlight That FIlters Through The Tree Leaves, and of Patron Saints - U173132

A brief summary of the villans in J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings


A714737 - The Major Villans In The Lord Of The Rings

Post 2

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")

Hi Mystrunner,

Nice entry!

A couple of suggestions:

1. There's quite a few spelling errors.
2. It might be worth putting something at the beginning to warn people about possible spoilers in the article.
3. I think more needs to be said about Sarauman, because I think he's quite an interesting character as a turncoat. What were his motivations?

Best wishes

Otto


A714737 - The Major Villans In The Lord Of The Rings

Post 3

Mystrunner

actually, Yeah! I had forgotten Saruman's motif. I'll see if I can glean out the spoilers, spelling, and gross inadequacies.


A714737 - The Major Villans In The Lord Of The Rings

Post 4

Mystrunner

Spelling should be improved. Along with Saruman, and If anyone sees a spoiler, point it out please. I'd like this to not ruin anyone's good time.
-Mystrunner
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