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Post 1

Jack

Entry: Milk - A693669
Author: Jack - U180388

Could I have some help with thin entry, please? smiley - grovel


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Post 2

Inkwash

Hi!

This could probably do with more facts on the dangers and less advice.
That tends to be the style with most guide entries.

Also, does this problem at all relate to lactose intolerance? There's something else that could be added if you feel the urge.
You could pad the whole entry out with some headers and subheaders too, see the GuideML help page for details.

All the best! smiley - ok


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