h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: How I began to question cannibalism. - A693551
Author: pikachurinpoche - U189692

This really happened. I put one book down and in less than an hour I had picked the other book up.

Hi, pikachurinpoche!

You ask at the end of your entry 'What do you think?'

I think that, while reading these works may have made a deep impression on you, your entry comes across as extremely confused. You seem to be commenting on cannibalism, the Bible, native American religions, the conquest of America, the Catholic church and maybe other things, but your train of thought is not very clear to an outsider.

Entries in Peer Review are supposed to be either ready or nearly ready to go into the Edited Guide. I'm afraid this entry is nowhere near ready yet. It would be a good idea to remove it from Peer Review and take a bit of time to work on it. Have a look at the Writing-Guidelines and you should get some useful hints.

Good luck!

Azara

Thank you. I just reread the guidelines. I had mixed up some of the options I had. I now believe these things should go into my journal, and I don't know how to get a couple of things off peer review.
Help! Thanks.

Hi Pikachurinpoche!

I was about to say something very similar to Azara.

To take your entry out of Peer Review, click on the green button just underneath the BBC toolbar at the top of your screen, scroll down until you find your entry and click on 'remove'. You can then decide the correct forum for your entry.

Take your time and have a look around the other possibilities, including the Writing Workshop, or you could decide to work on this entry and resubmit it when you are better prepared.