A Conversation for The Floating Bridge, Cowes to East Cowes, Isle of Wight, UK

Peer Review : A68911545 - The Floating Bridge, Cowes to East Cowes, Isle of Wight, UK

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: The Floating Bridge, Cowes to East Cowes, Isle of Wight, UK - A68911545
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

An entry about the Isle of Wight Floating Bridge - a ferry across the Medina.

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A68911545 - The Floating Bridge, Cowes to East Cowes, Isle of Wight, UK

Post 2

Bengal Tiger

Hi Bluebottle,
A really interesting entry. smiley - cheers
I'll take some time to finish going through it, and can share my views. smiley - smiley


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Post 3

BMT

This is another cracking piece of work <BB<, well done. smiley - ok


BMT Scout


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Post 4

Deadangel - Still not dead, just!

I'll come back with details once I've sobered up, but there's a problem with the first paragraph...ish.


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Post 5

Deadangel - Still not dead, just!

smiley - sigh So drunk I couldn't count to two.

The second paragraph starts "A floating bridge or chain ferry is essentially a ferry that travels between East and West Cowes.", which seems to be saying this is the only one there is. It would be clearer to say "THE floating bridge, or chain ferry, is essentially a ferry that travels between East and West Cowes."

Later on, in the description of floating bridges in Britain, you list a total of seven, includng this one, and later describe it as one of only six remaining.

You also mention the access that boats / ships need along this stretch of the river, but don't mention (I assume) that chain sits on the riverbed, rather than being taut enough to sit free of the river. Yes, it's a minor point, but will help clarity.

That's all I could see though. Well done, it's a captivating and interesting read.


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Post 6

Bluebottle

Okay, the six has been changed to seven. I've added that the chain sits on the riverbed, allowing vessels to cross over the chain, and amended the "A floating bridge" to "The floating bridge". Good points well made.

Incidentally, the Eric Meadus Floating Bridge painting is currently on display in Southampton Art Gallery until September 2010 as part of the "Sea Fever - Turner To Today" exhibition. It is next to the Lowry's Southampton Floating Bridge painting.

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Post 7

The H2G2 Editors

A lovely, interesting Entry Bluebottle, well done. Now, before we hit the big 'accept' button are there any final changes or comments that we need to take on board? smiley - ok


A68911545 - The Floating Bridge, Cowes to East Cowes, Isle of Wight, UK

Post 8

Bluebottle

No, I think that's fine. That was quick - it only had a few comments, too!

(Photo available on request, by the way)

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Post 9

The H2G2 Editors

OK Bluebottle, we'll let this sit for a coupld of days more and then we'll accept the Scout's pick. And yes, do send in a picture if you have one. Cheers, Eds smiley - ok


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Post 11

Bengal Tiger

Congratulations Bluebottle !!
smiley - applausesmiley - applausesmiley - applause

Waiting to see the entry on front page soon.

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Post 12

The H2G2 Editors

Yes, well done >BB> smiley - ok


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Post 13

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Well done! smiley - bubbly


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Post 14

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Well done, BB smiley - applause

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Post 15

Bluebottle

Thanks for your help, everyone - I look forward to seeing it on the front page soon.

By the way, photograph is available on request.

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Post 16

BMT

Well done >BB> smiley - applause

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Post 17

bobstafford

Well done BB smiley - applause as for the photo a fast track should be proposed post on the photographers sitesmiley - ok


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Post 18

The H2G2 Editors

Hi >BB>, send the photo in to us in-house via email and we'll take a look at it. smiley - ok


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Post 19

bobstafford

Woo Hoo even better BB smiley - magic


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Post 20

The H2G2 Editors

>>>as for the photo a fast track should be proposed post on the photographers site

Oops! Sorry, we didn't mean to 'override' that suggestion at all - apologies - >BB>, you can certainly go to via the photographer's route! smiley - ok


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