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Post 21

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

It's a direct quote from the DTLR (Dept of Transport etc) campaign. There won't be a copyright issue.

It's something I feel strongly about.

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Post 22

the Shee

How do you suggest I include it?--blockquote, or what...?

I realise you feel strongly about it--very much so smiley - hug.

smiley - smiley
Shee


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Post 23

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

There are two things that you could do - either canibalise it, or use it as a whole.

I would be tempted to use the first bit about fatigue and accidents as an introduction to the piece and to pick bits out of the rest and slot them in.

If you were to do it as a blockquote, it might be best not to italicize it - that makes it very difficult to read. The advice is from DTLR (Dept of Transport Local Government and the Regions).

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 24

the Shee

Okay, it is updated. I have one more question on the Department of Transport Local Government and the Regions--is it in the UK, US or somewhere else? I have it listed as UK, but I don't know... smiley - erm


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Post 25

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

It's UK. You can find the campaign details by the usual web starts followed by - think.[URL Removed By Moderator]

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 26

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Just read the amended entry.

smiley - oksmiley - smiley

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 27

the Shee

I've just linked to the UK and the US transit authority thingies that I mentioned in the entry... Excuse the word 'thingy', should it bother you... smiley - winkeye


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Post 28

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Ah, you saw it before the Mods got to it! And I thought I was being so careful.

The entry's looking better and better.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 29

the Shee

Nope, actually, I didn't... I'm just extremely good at making efficient use of Google smiley - winkeyesmiley - biggrin. Thanks for being helpful, though!

smiley - hug
Shee


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Post 30

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I thought the NHTSA site was very good on fatigue and I shall use the information in a work capacity. Thanks smiley - smiley.

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Post 31

the Shee

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Orcus

Nice one Shee, as said above, your article will now enter the editorial process. A sub-editor will massage and tweak it to the editorial guidelines, the senior editors will then further tweak, proof and approve it and then it will be queued for its grand entrance on the front page.

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Post 34

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

yep smiley - biggrin


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Post 35

the Shee

I hope it's done... smiley - ermsmiley - winkeye

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Post 36

Evil Zombie Strider

YAY! Congrats Shee! smiley - bubblysmiley - hug

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