h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

It's looking pretty good to me!

Hi Dark Penguin.

This is looking good. So good in fact that one of our Scouts has recommended it for the illustrious Edited Guide. Before I accept it, I thought I'd ask if you feel it's ready or if you'd want more time to tidy it up.

The only observation I'd make is regarding the section that reads:

'As one other reviewer (sadly, it appears, only passing through) put it: "Mostly Harmless". Not original, certainly, but typical.'

Not sure how much this adds to the entry, apart from a gratuitous Hitch-Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy reference that'll almost certainly be pruned.

Other than that, it looks good to me, so let me know what you want to happen next.

All the best,

Jimster

Hmm.

I'm pretty happy with the bits that made it this far. The section you referred to has already lost its connection to the rest of the piece, so I don't mind losing it completely. In fact, I've already twiddled it.
I've also adjusted the final paragraph, which I wasn't completely happy with, but I think looks better now.
Yep, I think I'm happy with this entry. Please move it forward as you wish, and go easy on the pruning.

Thanks

DP

Loud cheers!

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

Yay! It took some time, but it was worth it. Well done, Dark Penguin!