A Conversation for A Review of the Television Hit "House"
Well done!
U2006 Started conversation Nov 24, 2005
I really liked your entry. As a fan of the show i really thought you captured the essence of it. And you raise some interesting points, especially the fact that it isn't formumatic. Your enthusiasm and respect for the show really come to the fore!
Saddly on to the technicall side. Though i like your style i think your sentences are a little long sometimes, which can be rather destracting. Oh and you forgot a bracket at the end of "(remember the good old...". I don't want you to take this as critisism, i merly think that if you polished the sentence structure up a little it would make this article sparkle all the more.
It's a very promiseing start.
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