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Entry: Comic Strips - A61676346
Author: zaney_the_viper - U14290576

What do you think?

Hi

Good work but needs some of polish

For example

Garfield- This comic strip is about a fat, lazy cat who lies around all day and does nothing and his dorky owner, Jon. Needless to say, the jokes are fairly limited. They tend to fall into one of the following categories : 1) Garfield eats a lot. 2)Garfield sleeps a lot. 3) Garfield hates Mondays. (as opposed to Thursdays) 4) Jon has no life.

A simple layout change this will need you to work in guide ML (you are not so far) if you need help ask.



Garfield
This comic strip is about a fat, lazy cat who lies around all day and does nothing and his dorky owner, Jon.
Needless to say, the jokes are fairly limited. They tend to fall into one of the following categories :
1) Garfield eats a lot.
2) Garfield sleeps a lot.
3) Garfield hates Mondays. (as opposed to Thursdays)
4) Jon has no life.

Items 1 to 4 a little detail will go a long way, also where is the strip published.

Work through the others in the same way, this is an excellent start and has a lot of promise dont give up

Hello zaney and welcome to h2g2

Thank you for submitting an entry to Peer Review.

Please take a look at our <./>writing-guidelines</.> so that you understand the criteria for getting an Entry selected for the Edited Guide.


You will see that we cannot accept an entry where one already exists on the same subject, in this case there is one entitled "Comic Strips or Sequential Art" A412598 which I recommend you take a look at.

There are other entries on comics as well, here is the list:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/alabaster/C67

This doesn't mean that there will be no room for your entry, but that you must differentiate it sufficiently and make it original; ie *different* from the rest. Take a while to read other contributions and the guidelines, re-edit your entry in line with any comments you get here in Peer Review and Good Luck! It is always good to meet a new member.

I hope you have fun here in h2g2!

Lanzababy Scout

Thanks for the tip! I should probably pull a few strings here and there... change the title... Anyway, just wanted to thank you for the advice!

It is my pleasure zaney - we need new authors all the time. So we are here to help in any way we can!

Good advice LanzaB

Cheers Bob!

Are you in the snow or in the sun

sunshine Bob!

hi zaney -

Just a little nudge to remind you of this entry.

Hi zaney

I wonder what you intend to do with this Entry? Do you need any help?

The <./>Writing-workshop</.> might be a good place for some constructive advice.

Lanzababy

I don't know that that entry is going anywhere.
It seems sort of dead to me...

Would you like to keep it on your personal space? - then if ever you want to do anything more with it you could. It helps the site to keep tidy. Just click on the little x (or the remove button) at the right hand side of the Peer Review list and follow the instructions.


Did you have any more things in the pipe line? The site is a bit quiet at the moment, but once the refresh is underway there will be a much quicker publishing schedule I believe.




Lanzababy

The author seems to have elvised, so I'll put this on the tidy-up list

Yes, she seemed to give up on this one.

Agreed