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Peer Review: A613955 - Nail polish

Post 1

Martin Harper

Entry: Nail polish - A613955
Author: Lucinda (et al) - U129960

a Collaborative Writing Workshop veteran...


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Post 2

Mina

Hurrah! Great work putting it all together Lucinda. smiley - bubbly

Only one thing missing that I could see - nail polish 'dries' (evaporates) faster in water than in the air. There is a scientific reason for this which I can go searching for if we need to prove it. smiley - smiley


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Post 3

FABT - new venture A815654 Angel spoiler page

nice one, glad to see that some things do actually make it out of the CWW.

i think the smiley might have to go but other than that i liked it very much indeed.

FABT


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Post 4

FABT - new venture A815654 Angel spoiler page

polar solvents (water) verses non polar solvents (acteone) etc. but i forget why.


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Post 5

Mina

I remembered that it was something to do with the acetone, but that's as far as memory goes.


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Post 6

Martin Harper

Beat you to it, Mina smiley - smiley

> "If you're short of time, or you didn't follow earlier advice by going to the loo, 'dry' your nails in warm water as the solvent evaporates quicker in water than in air."


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Post 7

Mina

You've just added that! smiley - whistle I'm sure it wasn't there when I read it before I posted... And I *did* read it, promise!

(smiley - grovel)


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Post 8

Jimi X

One thing to possibly add in the colours section - my daughter has a shade that is silver but when it is exposed to direct sunlight, it changes to purple.

Tres cool! smiley - smiley


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Post 9

J'au-æmne

I have that one as well smiley - smiley Or did...


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Post 10

Ashley


When painting nails, leave a gap (ie, don't paint the whole nail) at the side. This way nails look longer smiley - smiley


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Post 11

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

It also minmises the risk of the "oops, I was in a hurry and missed" look....


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Post 12

Martin Harper

All suggestions added to the entry.
Leaving a gap down the sides - in the Collaborative Workshop someone suggested the same thing, but for a different reason: to allow the nail to breathe... smiley - smiley

-Lucinda


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Post 14

Martin Harper

oh goody gumdrops smiley - smiley
-Lucinda


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Post 15

Mina

Well done on putting it together Lucinda! ooh look, it has my name on it. smiley - biggrin


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