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A83494038 - Fear No More, Here Comes the Atomic Age

Post 1

Neverlander

Entry: Fear No More, Here Comes the Atomic Age - A83494038
Author: Neverlander - U14825871

Hallo everybody,
I don't know whether or not this is the right place, but ... who in this world knows that?
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A83494038 - Fear No More, Here Comes the Atomic Age

Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Ahem. I object to the bad-mouthing of smiley - mousesmiley - esuom in this story. Mice, as fellow mammals, deserve more respect and consideration from us. smiley - whistle I say this as a former raiser of smiley - hamsters, gerbils, and guinea pigs.

It is a well-known fact that cockroaches will be about the only motile organism to survive a nuclear holocaust. Thus it might be supposed that the cockroaches are behind it all.

As the wise songsmith wrote: 'La cucaracha, la cucaracha, no lo quiere caminar...' ('The cockroach doesn't want to travel on.') He adds something that might not get past the filter, about controlled substances and Pancho Villa...

Anyway. I'm looking forward to what you will come up with once you leave the 'Hitchhiker's Guide' universe behind and use your own voice. I detect a flair for humour in there. smiley - smiley


A83494038 - Fear No More, Here Comes the Atomic Age

Post 3

minorvogonpoet

I sympathise with your message about the effect of human carelessness on the planet. smiley - peacesign

However, I don't know if the idea of the mice creating Earth quite works as a means of getting this message across.

However, your message can be presented satirically, and I agree with Dmitri that you have a feel for this.

I particularly like the paragraph beginning "Humans are getting mad in the last days."smiley - smiley Perhaps you could expand this theme.


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