A Conversation for The Alternative Writing Workshop
A61145147 - Winter Eve
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Started conversation Dec 24, 2009
Entry: Winter Eve - A61145147
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - U1590784
Sort of a story here. At least, I hope so.
A61145147 - Winter Eve
minorvogonpoet Posted Dec 28, 2009
I love your description of the winter trees, and your use of them as a symbol for human sorrow. 
I wondered if the two lines beginning "He asks so little" go off on a bit of a tangent. But the dog is obviously important
Happy New Year to you! 
A61145147 - Winter Eve
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Dec 28, 2009
Thanks for the feedback, MVP.
I wanted the slight tangents with the dog - and to get in the idea of economics being part of the equation.
Sorry if I'm not cogent - the anaesthetic hasn't totally worn off yet from this morning's keyhole surgery...
Happy New Year, to you, as well.
I saw your username taken in vain at the Sports Salon. (I don't know if they give 'sporty' haircuts, but I think they are too expensive.)
The sign said, 'Treat Yourself to an MVP.'
I had to look twice.
A61145147 - Winter Eve
minorvogonpoet Posted Dec 29, 2009
Wishing you a good recovery from your surgery.
As for the MVP haircut, I shudder to think what kind of haircut a Vogon might come up with 
.
A61145147 - Winter Eve
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Dec 29, 2009
Thanks, you two. It seems to be going well so far.
Key: Complain about this post
A61145147 - Winter Eve
More Conversations for The Alternative Writing Workshop
Write an Entry
"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."