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A7091778 - Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence?

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LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights

Entry: Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence? - A7091778
Author: LeppardStalker - U1598392

This is an essay I'm writing for my Freshman level English class. I think it's actually one of my better essays, and I thought I'd get someone's opinion on it before I turn it in (I kind of need a good grade!!). Please note that since I'm at a college in the US, it's in American English form.


A7091778 - Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence?

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LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights

I forgot to mention: If you find too many passive voice sentences, please let me know how to change them... passive voice is my downfall, and the teacher takes off points for too much of it!


A7091778 - Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence?

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J

I don't know if you've turned this in or not yet, but, well, I liked it smiley - smiley Agreed with it for the most part. You raise some good points.

The ALF... avoiding the obvious Alien Life Form/1980s sitcom pun... it seems to me that any group that has "cells" in operation is going to cause problems. smiley - winkeye

Thanks for submitting this here. smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


A7091778 - Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence?

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LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights

Thanks for your comments VP Jodan - they gave me some extra confidence before turning it in! Glad that assignment is over... now I think I'll go enjoy a hard-earned cup of smiley - tea!


A7091778 - Jerry Vlasak – Heroic Activist or Inciter of Violence?

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Bluebottle

This was quite an interesting one.

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