h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I still think the "How to find it" directions should give a bit of context for "from the A38". Someone reading the entry just for interest should be able to locate it from the directions, and it took me quite a while. If it had said "from the A38(from Exeter)" I would have found it in a couple of seconds.

To any scouts chomping at the bit: this is an excellent entry and you should pick it straight away, my point above is a tiny quibble which can be dealt with at the sub-ed stage if needed.


Azara

Just for you, Azara, I've adjusted that bit

Perfect!

Azara

"Your Most Humble Servant, Joshua Sprigg, Ashburton, Jan. 11, 1646 at Noon."
I think that should be in italics since a signature is part of a letter, and therefore quoted. It looks odd being in regular font, as though it's an attribution.

The bulleted items in your list need tags around them, which is what we do now with items longer than a line each.

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

for Skankyrich!


Azara

well done Rich!

Ooh, marvellous

all round, eh?