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androyd Started conversation Mar 27, 2001
I think this is a good piece for a first effort - I would just suggest that you have a concluding para or two as a sort of summing up. The title is how hair conditioner works but you currently finish on static electricity - try rounding it all off. Also you might like to try doing a search on h2g2 for any other hair related entries and putting in links to them. It might not be a bad idea to search the whole of BBC Online and see if there are any other relevant articles you could link to.
Hope this helps - it is basically a well written and informative piece.
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