h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

THis is a very detailed and comprehensive entry about Rommel there is one typo I spotted around about the piece on Tobruk. I also suggest you break it up into even more paras. Have you joined the h2g2 university yet? I suggest you may want to investigate the History faculty. Why not submit this to the peer review page and see what the scouts etc have to say? It is certainly a very detailed and thoroughly reasearched piece of work. You may want to do a few searches and see if there are other guide entries you can reference - it probably wouldn't hurt to look up what else exists on bbc online and stick a reference in for that too.

Thanks a lot Androyd ! I have corrected the typo and have also submitted it to the peer review group ! I am now looking at breaking it up into smaller paragraphs. Ta lots !