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Entry: Queen Victoria's Railway (10th birthday submission) - A50602259 Author: Bob Stafford. ACE � - U3151547 Was here http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/F13323098?thread=6540092&post=80954970#p80954970 The entry went walkabout The replacement was reviewed here http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/F48874?thread=6540483&skip=0&show=20

Bob, this is in PR twice. Can you remove one to avoid confusion?

I suggest you keep the one with the active PR thread.

All done any more comments

Any more to add

I know what you're meaning Bob, but this reads somewhat as a contradiction

Usual stuff about dates:

November 29 1841 >> 29 November, 1841
October 8th 1843 >> 8 October, 1843
October 14th 1843 >>14 October, 1843

Rather than list the stations as a numerical list:
1. Fareham -
2. Fort Brockhurst -
3. Gosport

had you thought of formatting them like this: Fareham >> Fort Brockhurst >> Gosport, or perhaps better Fareham -> Fort Brockhurst -> Gosport?

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I think you need to rephrase this. 38 years is not exactly just prior to.

I don't mean to keep reposting, it's just that I find new things with each read through

I am very glad you take the interest I have covered the points please comment.

And it looks better thank you

Much better Bob

Any more comments

This one's been in the station for quite a while

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Thank you eyeryone who helped

Well done, Bob