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Peer Review : A48363014 - Retinopathy of prematurity
Teasswill Started conversation Apr 17, 2009
Entry: Retinopathy of prematurity - A48363014
Author: Teasswill (only if it's green) - U185992
Picked this up in the Flea market & I think it's now ready for further scrutiny.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Apr 17, 2009
Can you put in paragraph tags, please? Each paragraph should start with and end with
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BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows Posted Apr 17, 2009
Interesting rescue TS 
, and a useful reminder that, although essential for most forms of life on Earth, oxygen is, in fact, toxic!
Another link for you (possbly from 'For eyes to function...') is 'Eyesight' A18188670.
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h5ringer Posted Apr 17, 2009
<> repeated word 'is'
interupted >> interrupted
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 28, 2009
Title: Retinopathy of prematurity = Retinopathy of Prematurity
Good FM rescue this, well done Teasswill
GB
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Apr 28, 2009
I think this is a great foundation that could be built on by assuming the reader doesn't know anything about eyes.
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it is still not fully developed at birth
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 28, 2009
I think this is ready for picking, as it is about, as stated in the intro, an eye condition which may affect premature babies. We already have an extensive entry on eyesight in general at A18188670
GB
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Apr 28, 2009
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Teasswill Posted Apr 29, 2009
Correction done.
Had already linked to the eyesight entry.
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BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows Posted Apr 30, 2009
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 30, 2009
congratulations Teasswill, good rescue
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Apr 30, 2009
Great to see this hit FP
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Teasswill Posted May 1, 2009
everyone
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AlexAshman Posted May 7, 2009
Hi there Teasswill
I've just finished sub-editing your entry, which you can find at A50669805
Please let me know if it's ok or not, then I'll send it off for editing
Alex
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Teasswill Posted May 8, 2009
Looks good, thanks. Just spotted a superfluous 'the eye' after Stage one...optic dsic
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AlexAshman Posted May 9, 2009
Oops - sorted. Off it goes
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Peer Review : A48363014 - Retinopathy of prematurity
- 1: Teasswill (Apr 17, 2009)
- 2: Gnomon - time to move on (Apr 17, 2009)
- 3: BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows (Apr 17, 2009)
- 4: h5ringer (Apr 17, 2009)
- 5: Teasswill (Apr 17, 2009)
- 6: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Apr 28, 2009)
- 7: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Apr 28, 2009)
- 8: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Apr 28, 2009)
- 9: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Apr 28, 2009)
- 10: Teasswill (Apr 29, 2009)
- 11: h2g2 auto-messages (Apr 30, 2009)
- 12: BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows (Apr 30, 2009)
- 13: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Apr 30, 2009)
- 14: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Apr 30, 2009)
- 15: Teasswill (May 1, 2009)
- 16: AlexAshman (May 7, 2009)
- 17: Teasswill (May 8, 2009)
- 18: AlexAshman (May 9, 2009)
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