h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Yes. You haven't incorporated Posts 16, 17, 18 - which all seem quite reasonable to me

Thanks Trout, i may put this and the story/superstition about witches using them as boats into the article later today.

mini

ok, additions and changes have been made. if some kind person would remind nme how to put links in to other articles with GuideML it would be much appreciated. Also if any more little typos have managed to sneak in then please feel free to point them out to me so that i can fix them.

mini

*Blue Peter voice*...

Here's one you made earlier

blind


Just change the A number and link it around the chosen word.


lil x

ah hah, thanks lil

*s off to put some links in*

mini

Alternative Uses for Eggshells - A45715098

now with added links, i will have a look around for more suitable ones later. How is it looking?

mini

It's coming along extremely well


lil x

Yes, looking very good, mc

This is a great, insightful Entry you have here

Just a few nitpicks

The word 'entry' may carry a capital 'E'

Be careful, don't change tenses <> should be 'the paint has dried'.

Be careful with spelling < is wrong it should be 'believe that eggshells'. You could copy and paste this to word to see whether there are more typos.

Some people like the use of 'you' in Entries others try to avoid it.

It may be possible to find more links for this Entry e.g.
A246971 Compost

Keep Writing

thanks, will run it through another spellcheck and see if theres any more typos hiding in there. (word on a mac )

i have a bit of a just now, so shall fix these nitpicks tomorrow.

mini

Very nice, I must say

One thing I noticed

>>I have listed a few just to get you started.<<

First person is discouraged, I believe - only change this to *We* have listed...

First person is definitely discouraged

GB
Scout

oops, will go chase the errant "I" when i am back on my own computer.

mini

miniwill you add the other sugestons as well?

Nother -Scout

<>

get get = delete one "get"

nother, which suggestions have i missed?

I would like to do a full edit/update of this later today, so one post listing the remaining errors would be really handy.

mini

It would be more helpful to the Scouts if you could list the corrections as you do them, mini

does this seem ready d'you think?

Now would be a good time for completion

Did see the typos are still present...

Minichessemouse, the mobile can also be made using halves of egg shells cleaned and decorated. Loads of arty/crafty ideas about but I notice many use white egg shells