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Peer Review: A45002567 - Little Richard

Post 1

shagbark

Entry: Little Richard - A45002567
Author: Shagbark - U170775

I know this is a bit short for an edited article. Does anyone think this should have gone to the Writing workshop rather than here?


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Post 2

Noth€r

Yes- you shuld only stick it here in peereview if its finishedsmiley - cheers

Noth€rsmiley - ale


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Post 3

shagbark

I think it is finished. The question is does anyone else think it is finished.


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Post 4

Noth€r

smiley - rolleyesno i dont. its a bit rubbish actualysmiley - yawn

Noth€rsmiley - ale


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Post 5

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Shagbark, Little Richard has been in the music business for more than 50 years, there must be a lot more than that in his biograpy smiley - erm


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Post 6

minichessemouse - Ahoy there me barnacle!

It does need a little more work maybe. But there is the beginnings of a guide entry in there. Can you tell us about his family, or his hometown. More about his church or the soap opera you mentioned. Maybe have a look at some other biography type entries. But dont lose heart.

minismiley - mouse


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Post 7

Noth€r

http://www.rollingstone.com/news/story/5939214/the_immortals_the_first_fifty/ numb 8 gratest rock & roll star of all timesmiley - wow


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Post 8

h5ringer

Shagbark, there is no way that this would ever make it into the EG in its present state. There are plenty of examples in the Guide of music bios. Can I suggest you read some of those first to get an idea of the sort of standard we would be looking for here.

smiley - sorry but not even close, let alone the cigar.


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Post 9

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Examples for Shagbark's perusal:
A12921860 - Billy Fury
A22347146 - Ringo Starr

GB
smiley - galaxy


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Post 10

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

I don't think you should have said posting 4 Nother. We shouldn't be putting people off, we should be encouraging them.

In my eyes I also see the beginning of a good entry here. It definitely needs padding out. It would be nice to hear what people thought of him, why he became a singer, things about him few people know etc


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Post 11

shagbark

I have listened and I have heard. I will withdraw it from peer review until I get more content.


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Post 12

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor


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Post 13

shagbark

Another example of a well fleshed out article
A49713375
hit the front page in April 2009.


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Post 14

shagbark

Source for extra Material (on inter-library loan from Warren Public Library) The Life and times of Little Richard the Quasar of Rock by Charles White of BBC-TV Published by Harmony books copyright 1984
Richard Wayne Penniman, Charles White , and Robert A Blackwell


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