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The use of first person
§hadow Started conversation Oct 6, 2000
When writing an entry intended for addition to the Guide, avoid using the first person as in, "I, me, my, etc..." You have a lot of good references and have listed them, which is good. Do the rewrite without and lose the "I, me, my's" and I'll put this up for recommendation in a heart-beat. Particularly because you're correct!
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