A Conversation for Bernoulli's Principle

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Post 1

Deano (Keeper of lemonade)

Put a full stop after 'hurricane' at the end of the first paragraph.
smiley - smiley


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Post 2

Zak T Duck

Picky


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Post 3

Zak T Duck

It's only a rough draft anyway. It'll be improved once I get my old physics textbook here and I can jazz it up a bit.


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J'au-æmne

Good entry. smiley - smiley Not being too familliar with the principle myself (yet?) I can't vouch for the science too much 'cept that it seems sound, and the paper thing works smiley - winkeye

Worth remembering is that your pullquote will be removed by a subeditor- it may be better to change it yourself so that you have more control over the finished entry...

And those Bernoillis have a lot to answer for. smiley - smiley


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Zak T Duck

Changed the pullquote to italics. Looks just as nice and it's SubEd friendly smiley - winkeye


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