h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Non Timetus Messor: The Blue Öyster Cult - A4329173
Author: AgProv - U538194

I really hope this meets the requirements... if in your opinion it does not, please feel free to move it to any other of your choosing. It was fun to write!

Regards

Paul (AgProv)

Hi AgProv

You've submitted this entry to PeerReview, a review forum for entries that follow the <./>writing-guidelines</.>. These are standards for entries that are being considered for the Edited Guide, h2g2's non-fiction encyclopedia-esque section. Unfortunately, your entry doesn't follow the writing guidelines, because these don't allow first-person references. You have to write an entry that's factual and not a personal narrative.

That being said, there are a few things you can do with this entry. If you'd prefer to keep it as it is, you could submit it to Writing-Alternative, which accepts entries that don't follow the writing guidelines. Alternative Writing Workshop entries eventually go into the <./>UnderGuide</.>, h2g2's outlet for fiction and narratives and that sort of thing. Alternatively, you could submit it to <./>ThePost</.>, h2g2's community newspaper, which loves entries of any kind.

If you wanted to make this entry into something more suitable for the Edited Guide, though, you could talk more objectively about the band. Their history, who the musicians are, what albums they've recorded, and that sort of thing. You might want to check out C495, which includes many Edited Entries on bands of all sorts, if you're interested in pursuing that route.

If you decide to submit the entry (as is) to another review forum, you'll have to remove it from Peer Review. Just find your entry in the Peer Review listing, and click on the 'x' to remove it. Then you can go ahead and submit it to the correct forum (probably Writing-Alternative, by selecting it from the drop-down menu.

Good luck!

Cheers! An impartial outside eye on your work always helps, especially since it's so easy to get so bound up in what you're writing that you can't see the wood for the trees - entry now transferred to Alternative writing in the first instance, I'll certainly check out C495!

Great! Perhaps I'll pop over there and take a look at it soon.

How do I go about updating an article after it's been accepted by the UG?

Some new info really needs to be added here, esp to the Patti Smith segment.