A Conversation for How To Make A Low-Grease Cheeseburger-Like Sandwich In Your Own Home

A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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unremarkable: Lurker, OMFC, LPAS

your secret is safe with me.... smiley - winkeye


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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kabads

I think it's a good start, although I agree with other threads - the idea of putting any kind of spread (marg or butter) is totally urggh! to me and the thought of putting it on the outside of the bread - how do you manage to eat it?

I think you need to describe how to make different types of burgers instead of being generic about the one that you eat. Different people eat different burgers. Give the reader the option of different burgers.

smiley - smiley


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily [(11*5)-(4*2+5)=42] (Scout)

The reason why it is put on the outside is so the bread toasts. If you don't put the margarine on the outside, it burns; it turns to a flavorful golden brown with the margarine.

As for other recipies? I'm aiming for simplicity. I've made suggestions in the bottom, and I expect the forums to take fire with ideas. I've heard that comment- more recipies- before, but it's not the point. The article is about this particular recipie, and my giving the undetailed suggestions which I am now is a comprimise.

I have my reasons for it being on the outside; it IS totally inedible with it on the inside, but the bread is burned if you don't put it on the outside. It melts into the bread and helps crisp up the bread, as well as change the flavor.

Don't diss something you (obviously) haven't tried. smiley - winkeye

--SmartGamer


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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kabads

I'm not disrespecting this article - I thought you put it into Peer review for discussion and suggestions smiley - smiley

People here try to add things to your article to make them more interesting and editable. It's up to you if you take their advice or not.

Please don't expect to only get advice that you wanted in the first place. That's not what Peer Review is for. smiley - smiley


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily [(11*5)-(4*2+5)=42] (Scout)

:P

I was just kidding...


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily [(11*5)-(4*2+5)=42] (Scout)

But not about needing the butter there. I was kidding about the insult part smiley - winkeye


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A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily [(11*5)-(4*2+5)=42] (Scout)

YAHOO!


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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unremarkable: Lurker, OMFC, LPAS

way to hang in there! smiley - biggrin

congrats.


A428357: A Low Grease, Home-Made Cheeseburger

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SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily [(11*5)-(4*2+5)=42] (Scout)

I think it's funny... it lays dormant for months, and it finally gets looked at.

Whatever.

I guess the system is in my domain, for it Breaks Down Easily!

--SmartGamer, Keeper of That Which Breaks Down Easily (Ace)


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