h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I consider this article to be the "alpha" version of a (possible) final version. So any comments, criticism, improvements etc. are welcome.

Cheers ,
Researcher 146533 (better name to come soon)

Fascinating entry

Thanks. But seriously: Any idea what to improve?

Joanna ask me to pop over and have a read.

I will, over the next few days or so, look at it and give you a review. I am up to my neck IRL so If I get delayed - dont worry - I will get back to you.

Just one little thing that I noticed as I glanced through

Guide Entries are prefered to be written in the third person - The words *you* and *I* etc. should be avoided like the plague.
vegiman

Hi vegiman,

thanks for the hint concerning the style. I just updated my entry appropriately.
And anyways thanks for reviewing.

Before you do any more work on this page - please check out
http://www.h2g2.com/A305407

If you feel you have more to add to that article on Particle Accelerators then it could be added to it later. If you disagree with anything on that page then say so in a forum attached to the page.

Best intentions
vegiman

Thanks again for the hint. I think the two entries are not really contraproductive. But I fell I should discuss some points in the "particle accelerator" entry for reasons of actuality.

I have bought your posting to the attention of the editor.

If you are really sure your article does not cover the same ground as the other article then I will come back at a later time, (Time is pressing at the moment) and help correct some of your spelling and grammar.
I wish my command of German was as good as your English. I have just one language (English) at my disposal.

I will return in a couple of days or so.
vegiman

I think that it is justified to have them both, because this one gives *specific* information on CERN. I'm aiming to wrangle a trip there someday, its nice to read more about it...

Hi 146533

I have downloaded your page and if you would like to email me - we will go through it together - to much to put on a forum.

You can email me from my page
http://www.h2g2.com/u34006

Hope to talk to you soon
vegiman