A Conversation for dangerous cycling path in berlin
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AlexAshman Started conversation Jun 10, 2004
I'd like to offer you some help in terms of spelling and grammar - hope you don't mind
You could do with starting each sentence with a capital letter.
'Berlin' should also be capitalised.
Change 'frient' to 'friend'
Change 'teeths' to 'teeth' (one tooth, two teeth...)
To save you the bother of changing these things, you can use the following corrected version if you want to...
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The cycling path in karl-marx-allee in Berlin is extremely dangerous. The cycling path is on a pavement, about 25cm higher than the street. Every couple of hundred meters there are gaps in the pavement that go all the way to the cycling lane. The gaps are about half a meter wide. It is a very natural idea to use the space between cycling lane and the street for overtaking slower cyclists. The gaps are almost invisible.
A couple of weeks ago a friend of mine crashed in one of the gaps and smashed his front teeth.
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Thanks for the warning... 
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