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Post 1

Giford

Entry: BRM - The Formula One Team - A36256287
Author: Giford - U187177

The last in my little tryptych of F1 entries.

Gif smiley - geek


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Post 2

h5ringer

Hi Gif smiley - cheerup A small number of typos spotted as I read through:

>>losing the Divers' Championship<< losing the D*r*ivers' Championship
>>In 1966, the Foruma One regulations<< Formuma -> Formula
>>Thouroughbred Grand Prix<< Thoroughbred Grand Prix


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Post 3

Giford

Cheers h5, all fixed.

Gif smiley - geek


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Post 4

Fizzymouse- no place like home



Well, not one I would normally read because I'm not into racing of any type - but what a surprise.smiley - boing


I laughed out loud twice - the first paragraph and the heading the glory year.smiley - rofl


Well done .... it did it for me.smiley - laugh


smiley - mouse


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Post 5

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

I think this is a lovely entry.


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Post 6

AlexAshman


"voiturette category" - perhaps a footnote explaining this?

the genius of Clark and Lotus designer Colin Chapman
-->
the genius of Clark and the Lotus designer Colin Chapman

Alex smiley - smiley


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Post 7

Giford

Thanks for your comments, folx; changes made as suggested.

Gif smiley - geek


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Post 9

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Well Done smiley - applause


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Post 10

AlexAshman


smiley - applausesmiley - bubblysmiley - cake


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